Remodel and Rewrite

We’ve just completed a remodel of our master bath. It’s a small room, so it wasn’t too complicated, it seemed to take forever.

The harvest gold wasn’t the main problem (I still think it’s a pretty color), but the non-functioning faucet and obvious leakage behind the tiles was.

The whole thing was stripped down to the bare walls. Well, beyond the bare walls, actually. To the studs in places. Then, over the last 3 weeks, a brand new bathroom was created.

This reminds me of some stories I’ve written. It also reminds me of a novel I’m presently gutting and redoing. I’ve been fiddling around with the sequel to EINE KLEIN MURDER, which I’m calling REQUIEM FOR RED as a working title. The bones are there. I guess those are the bare studs. But things need to be moved around and rearranged. I’m looking forward to having a new novel out of this eventually

Some of the Throes of Moving

The two things I hate leaving most (besides friends and family) are my doctor and my hairdresser. It’s such a pain to have to break new ones in! My husband and I are both getting shaggy, so we’d better get on that one soon.

One thing I thought I wouldn’t have to do is find a new place to bank for my Kaye George business account. However, my Texas credit union isn’t going to work here. I was told they do some sort of remote/share banking with Tennessee credit unions. However, after spending eons on hold with them (at the TN credit union!), I found out that business accounts are not eligible for that. Ugh. So today I’ll open an account with a local credit union, then start to switch all the associations: Amazon, B&N’s Pubit, PayPal, Createspace, Smashwords, Untreed Reads, and probably some that I’ve forgotten. Some of those pay directly to PayPal (I’m pretty sure Untreed Reads does), so maybe that job won’t be as bad as I’m thinking it will be.

We got some new furniture delivered yesterday. We left our dressers behind when we left Taylor for Hubbard in June of last year. I bought a new dresser in Waco, while we were in Hubbard, but Cliff didn’t. Now we both have new ones! It is SUCH a pain living out of a suitcase in your own home.

Our new house has a lovely sunroom in the back, overlooking our yard and the woods at the foot of our property. Our other new purchase was a small round table and four chairs for that sunroom. Can’t wait for my first cup of tea at my new table. In fact, I’m going to go make that right now.

Meanwhile, writing-wise, I’m in the midst of galley proofs for EINE KLEINE MURDER and they’re going very well! I hope to finish well before my 20-day deadline.

The Editing Process

[[We’re probably all moved to Tennessee by now, but I’m posting this to give myself a breather while I get organized in my new life. This is not a repeat, but follows the two previous “process’ posts.]]

It’s taken me quite a while to evolve my own editing process. Some of this probably overlaps just a bit with plotting because my stories evolve as I go through the writing of them. I use pieces of information from classes that I’ve taken over the years, extracting what I know will work for me.

I like to get a full read from someone who hasn’t read my manuscript before. These people can catch things that my regular critiquers, who have been giving me feedback as I write, might overlook because they already know the story well.

Some typical catches are, for a continuing series, not explaining who characters are or describing them enough when they are continuing characters. In case someone is reading one of my books and hasn’t read the others in the series, I don’t want them to be confused and lost!

Other good catches are having five- or eight-day weeks, thirty hour days, going for twelve hours without eating, or having characters be where they can’t be, considering I put them someplace else at the same time.

Next I make sure there are hooks where they need to be, in the beginning, at the end of the first chapter, and at the ends of other chapters and, sometimes, scenes. (Some editors want a hook at the end of each and every chapter, some don’t.)

While I’m dealing with hooks, I see if I can do any backloading at the ends of scenes or chapters. This is where you change your sentence order to put the word with the most impact at the end of the sentence. Something like: I saw, dimly through the haze that filled the room, a ghost. Instead of: I saw a ghost, dimly, through the haze that filled the room.

I try to use one of  Harlan Coben’s devices (a writer I admire incredibly) somewhere in the first chapter, preferably in the first three pages or so, of doing a repeated word, at least three times, for emotional effect. Here’s an example: http://www.margielawson.com/deep-editing-analyses/27-harlan-coben-hold-tight

What I do, when I have the plot all straightened out, is print my pages and get out a set of highlighters. I do a modification of Margie Lawson’s Deep Edits system. I highlight descriptions in green, dialogue in yellow, emotional reactions in pink, and put orange lines in the margins by escalating tension. I underline, at the beginning of each scene, things that tell me where and when it takes places, making sure I’m grounding the reader for that scene. I then underline, in red, each instance of using four of the five senses: smell, touch, sound, and taste. I assume that sight is taken care of in descriptions.

When I think those things are balanced out, I bring up my document on one screen and open ReadPlease in another. I paste each chapter, one at a time, into the provided place, and let the program read my prose out loud to me while I follow along in the document. When I catch an error, or an awkward passage, I flip over, pause the reading program, and fix the problem.

Then I put it away for a week or two, print it out again, and read it through, hoping I still like it!